Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at widespread electronic mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them with the intention to study what to do in another way.
Be a part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Development Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇
Topic: Going to SaaStr this yr?
Hey Will,
xxxxxxx is an occasion sponsor from Sept thirteenth – fifteenth and will likely be positioned at Sales space #xxx.
For a little bit of context, xxxxxxx is a product-led development platform for internet and cellular merchandise that helps firms optimize their consumer’s expertise with instruments like in-app onboarding checklists, bulletins, product excursions, and surveys.
Corporations generally strategy xxxxxxx looking for assist with:
- Person Onboarding
- Activation & Conversion Charges
- New Characteristic Adoption
- Churn & Retention
If any of this resonates with you, come go to our sales space at SaaStr! Can’t make it? Schedule a demo right here as a substitute.
Hope to see you there.
xxxxxxx
Take 1: Did My Homework
Topic: PLG @ SaaStr
Noticed you and the group are headed to SaaStr, Will!
I wished to catch up on the occasion. With Dorothy and Josh approaching board to guide gross sales, I think about you’re utilizing product knowledge to assist prioritize their time.
Curious to study what you’ve been doing to leverage product knowledge. We assist groups discover the alerts to ship extra scaled interactions… or interventions.
Will
Take 2: Didn’t Do My Homework
Topic: PLG @ SaaStr
Is the group heading to SaaStr, Will?
We’re reaching out to PLG firms to attach on the occasion. We assist PLG groups make sense of their product knowledge to tweak issues like onboarding and lowering churn.
In case you are, I’d like to catch up. We have now a sales space (#123) however would love to attach 1:1.
Let me know!
Will
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