Need to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will take a look at frequent e-mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them in an effort to be taught what to do otherwise.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising and marketing at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇
Topic: Will, Can we join to debate partnership alternatives?
Hello Will, Greetings!
I got here throughout your LinkedIn profile – favored how passionate you’ve been with work and it’s nice to see you main your organization to newer heights.
I’m from, XXXXX XXXXX a 350+ member, Licensed associate with a number of World IT distributors PEGA, Microsoft, Oracle, TOSCA, Google. We’ve facilities of excellence in Cloud, Customized Software program Growth, DevOps, PEGA, SaaS, AI, Information warehousing, Information Analytics, BI, and Testing. We’d be glad to be a seamless extension of your crew.
Can I schedule a fast name immediately or tomorrow to elucidate extra about it? Eagerly trying ahead to listening to from you.
Thanks & Greatest Regards,
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Will’s Take
Topic: Lavender Measurement: Are you outsourcing?
Hey Will,
I got here throughout Lavender from our work serving to groups in healthcare & insurance coverage with gross sales automation. Can’t lie… I used to be a bit stunned.
Given the standard of your extension, I believed your crew could be a lot bigger.
Is the crew outsourcing a few of that work immediately? If not, we will help offload some initiatives that may bottleneck your progress.
Observe up with a considerate bump:
Hey Will,
Given your crew measurement, I’d be stunned to listen to you hadn’t thought-about outsourcing dev. Did you’ve any suggestions on my be aware beneath?
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