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Twitter Bio or… chilly e-mail 🤔?


Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?

Kristina and Will have a look at frequent e-mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them so that you could be taught what to do otherwise.

Be a part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Development Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.

Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails under! 👇



Topic: Ex-Firm // usage-based billing

Hello Will – after exploring plenty of instruments much like Lavender, and am impressed with what you all have constructed. As you all develop, I’m to understand how you’ll invoice on utilization.

Having finalized distinctive business phrases with various ranges of dedication whereas at COMPANY, it was a simple choice to hitch a staff that’s fixing the subsequent a part of this advanced equation – billing and invoicing.

Our founding staff at NEW COMPANY comes from Asana, Stripe, Plaid & Samsara, the place we collectively skilled the pains which are related to billing for a usage-based pricing mannequin, and we’ve constructed a developer-first billing system designed to adapt to what you are promoting mannequin.

Curious – is billing one thing that the staff is prioritizing as you proceed to scale and implement new merchandise & pricing plans?

Hope to attach quickly,
REP

2 Days Later…

Hello Will,

Thought it’s possible you’ll have an interest on this weblog submit the place Scott Buxton, former VP of Finance at DataDog, shares how he took their enterprise from $20m ARR to $1B in a 6 12 months span with a usage-based mannequin that offered final flexibility and transparency to clients.

Realizing that you simply function with the same enterprise mannequin right this moment, are you at the moment allocating too many engineering assets to repairs your in-house billing system, repair breakages and re-integrate each time there are new product and pricing rollouts?

At NEW COMPANY we’ve constructed a billing and analytics platform that permits corporations like CS1, caseS2, CS#3, and many others. to save lots of hours of engineering assets on billing-caused breakages & re-integrations, and allocate that point to core product growth.

Pleased to stroll you thru a fast demo so that you can envision how NEW COMPANY can additional optimize Trylavender billing workflow.

Finest,
REP


Will’s Rewrite:

Topic: Pay Per E-mail Choice?

Hey Will,

From the seems of the wizard in your web site – is it honest to say y’all wish to be totally different?

We’re constructing a product to make utilization primarily based billing straightforward to implement.

Open to seeing if a number of clients need to suppose otherwise too?

REP

2 Days Later:

Thought this would possibly spur some concepts, Will.

*hyperlink*

It’s a weblog submit from DataDog’s VP of Finance. Do you know usage-based pricing was the explanation DataDog went from $20M to $1B in ARR?

I feel it may apply for y’all if we discover the correct prospects.

Let me know in case you’re open to brainstorming it.

REP

PS.Given that is completely new, we’d completely tackle the dev work.

 


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