Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at frequent e mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them so to be taught what to do in a different way.
Be a part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Development Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails under! 👇
Electronic mail
Will,
I wished to observe up on my final e mail.
Our retention charge working with firms like yours is 87% after 2 months as a result of we preserve bringing them new prospects.
Our e mail tech + your killer supply, despatched 100s of occasions a day to focused lead lists – you’ll constantly generate leads.
Merely put – what we do, works.
As a result of we’re particularly on the lookout for information, analytics and software program firms just like you, we solely have 5 spots accessible in your business.
Would you be open to debate the above over a fast 15-minute name?
Observe Up 1: BAR Your Case Examine
Will, are you conversant in _____?
Once we met them, they appeared to be at an identical stage. Most leads got here by way of their PLG movement.
We bolted onto their outbound staff. Particularly, we centered on serving to scale up their particular person consumer base.
Because of this, their staff needed to 2x to handle the certified inbound. Month-to-month MRR development has 2x’d.
Has your staff achieved any outbound for this but?
Observe Up 2: Considerate Bump
Hey Will, did you catch my observe?
I reached out as a result of we’ve been having numerous success working with PLG pushed firms.
If outsourcing a few of your outbound isn’t a precedence, simply let me know. Glad to share a few of what we’ve seen working.
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